Today we are going to write our own diary entry! Before you start, you might want to look back at all of the work that you have done so far this week to give you even more ideas.
As you are writing, make sure that you are including everything from the checklist below:
Don't forget! Make sure that you are including all of our writing Success Criteria too!
Tiddlers and Superworms, your success criteria are GREEN.
Gruffalos, you must include GREEN and ORANGE!
Before you write your own diary entry, you will need a plan! Follow the steps below to plan out your own diary entry. You might want to just jot down ideas or words in your yellow home learning book, or you could create a more detailed plan with interesting phrases.
To make our final diary entry amazing, we are going to use time connectives! This will help us to put our diary in order and it will make more sense to the reader.
First Next After that Then Secondly Later on A while later
Here are some events from my day that I have muddled up. I have also forgotten to include any time connectives! Silly Mrs Reason!
I ate a tasty curry for my dinner.
I brushed my teeth then ate my breakfast.
I made a cup of coffee.
I watched a film on Netflix with Mr Reason.
I mowed the grass and watered all of the flowers in my garden.
Tiddlers and Superworms
Go back to your diary entry from yesterday. Did you include time connectives? Can you see where you could use one? Can you add it in?
Today we are going to write a diary entry from the point of view of Sophie on the day when the Tiger came to tea! First you will need to watch the story below and think about the questions below:
REMEMBER to use your success criteria that you created yesterday!
This week we are going to be writing a diary! Before we make a start on writing our own diaries, we will have to look at a range of diaries and pick out the features.
Here are a range of diary entries to look at. Superworms and Tiddlers, you might need to get a grown-up to help with some tricky words.
Are any of these things the same?
Write your Success Criteria in your yellow home learning book. Don't forget to read the diaries below, and you can even check your Success Criteria against the checklist below.