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Writing Activities 13.07.20 - 16.07.20

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Lesson 7 - Write Diary Entry

 

Now use your plan to write your diary entry. Remember to include the features of a diary that we have learnt about and the success criteria.

 

Tiddlers and Superworms, your success criteria are GREEN.

Gruffalos, you must include GREEN and ORANGE!

 

  • Capital letters
  • Full stops
  • Finger spaces
  • Phonics
  • Adjectives (describing words) 
  • Interesting sentence openers
  • Paragraphs
  • Conjunctions (and so because or when)

 

Lesson 6 - Plan

 

Today we are going to plan what goes into your diary entry. Let's recap what a diary would include:

 

  • Starter - Dear Diary
  • Linking words - Next, after, then, after that, later
  • 1st person - using I and my
  • Feelings - excited, happy, thrilled
  • Date - Monday 13th July
  • Events in the order they happened. 

 

Think about all the things we have learnt and try and use them in your diary. 

 

 

 

 

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